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when i think of the color brown
it never gives me a frown
i want to jump upside down
act silly and joyful all around
the color reminds me of my puppy
in which i got when i was feeling yucky
reminds me of the tree i climbed
and near it i found a shiny dime!
reminds of the dirt in my backyard
where we set the table and played cards
reminds me of the time i got my laptop
and now im on it nonstop!
reminds me of the old job i used to hate
where i had to wipe their...oh wait
ah..the color brown how i adore you
i shall love it still, even if its the color of poo.
©2009 ~Zanna114
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Author's Comments

those who know me, know that Brown is my favorite color. i wanted to express my feelings for it in a nice little poem. now i kno it may not be perfect an heart-warming like some other ppl ive read, but it is written in a style of my own.

it seems like the color brown has been givn a bad rap an not alot of ppl like it but to me it brings fond memories an indescribable experiences.

so i hope u all enjoy reading it as much i enjoyed writing it!

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:iconnintenerd:
LOL!!! I love the last 2 verses! brown isnt all that bad i will admit, its just that its kinda dull. although id be a hypocrite cause my fave color is black and thats a dark dull color...soooo.....yeeeaa......

im getting off topic. ill just say awesome tribute to brown and be on my way. ^-^

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say u hate kirby cause he's pink......& ill kill you. then kirby will eat ur soul. then he'll become soul kirby with which he will wreak havoc all over the world, causing people to forcibly love him, making everybody like zombies!....go ahead.....i dare u
:iconzanna114:
black is a very nice color. its pretty like the night sky. btw i rly ur personal comment! its so Kirby-ish! lol i wont say i hate kirby cuz i love kirby! an it would be totally awesome to see a soul kirby!! AH! yay! kirby! right back at ya!!

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"it is not what we say for feel that makes us what we are it is what we do...or fail to do" -"Sense an Sensiblity" Jane Austen...
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i didnt know how I felt about this poem at first. I thought it was nice, but i was won over by the "oh wait.." lol if some one knows your stories, it takes on a special meaning. :D

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Art is parasitic on life, just as criticism is parasitic on art.
Harry S. Truman
:iconnintenerd:
lol! exactly. kirby is the man.

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say u hate kirby cause he's pink......& ill kill you. then kirby will eat ur soul. then he'll become soul kirby with which he will wreak havoc all over the world, causing people to forcibly love him, making everybody like zombies!....go ahead.....i dare u

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